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Post by ironguardian on Mar 21, 2008 7:40:28 GMT -5
Do This In Remembrance Of Me
Come in, sit down. Be at ease, be of good cheer. Let me wash your feet, no comfort too great. I am your king, but tonight I am here to serve. Let me take your worries, let me take your pain. Lean against me if you fear you will falter, and I will steady your path. Give to me your burden, I will carry your cross.
Strange that should be mentioned, as thats why we're here. As the Lord has said, the Messiah will come. But more on that latter, you look hungry, let us eat. I fear you will never realise the true importance of this meal. Let me make it clear for you, so all may understand. Please pass me the bread, I wish to break it and give thanks.
This is my body, fragile and human. It will be torn and ripped, hungrily devoured. Do this in remembrance of me.
Do not look so shocked or so forlorn. Here, this should cheer you up. Pass the win. For man cannot live on bread alone.
This is my blood, precious and pure. It will be beaten out f me, flowing freely. Do this in remembrance of me.
Come now, do not cry. This is a joyous occasion. A chance to reflect on the Grace of God. I understand your hesitance, for none of us are worthy. Alas, this is why this must be so. I will serve to the bitter end. This is a cup I must drink alone, even my Father will turn from me. But not tonight. Do this in remembrance of me.
Rowland Gwynne 2008
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Post by metasaiah on Mar 22, 2008 19:17:27 GMT -5
That's beautiful Rowland. Well done mate. Lest we forget.
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Post by exodus312 on Mar 24, 2008 7:05:44 GMT -5
mind if I take it and add some music?
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Post by ironguardian on Mar 24, 2008 7:28:34 GMT -5
I'm going to do that myself eventually... but as I'm still learning I can't do it justice yet.
Go for it, although all lyrical rights remain mine... and all that stuff..
What sort of style did you have in mind?
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Post by zooba on Mar 24, 2008 7:28:59 GMT -5
80s synth pop
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Post by exodus312 on Mar 25, 2008 0:25:03 GMT -5
have no fear, all lyric rights are yours... I had no intention on stealing them.
As for style, I came up with a couple of riffs yesterday... They're kinda Scourged Flesh-y (kinda), with a little bit of groove... We'll see what else I can come up with. Hard to explain without actually hearing it.
Vocal style, I'm thinking along the lines of both growls and clean singing, maybe even a couple of spoken passages...dunno yet.
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Post by exodus312 on Mar 25, 2008 23:33:07 GMT -5
after having another go at it last night, I realise that the SF description that I gave it really isn't fitting... I have no idea what style it is, other than metal-ish
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